After two weeks, I finally finished writing my first-person work, because the pressure of schoolwork forced me to sandwich my time for writing between both work and time for friends. So here you go, I named it as "The Gift", because I'm so bored and unimaginative tonight I don't want to spend any more time thinking of a good title.
Click here to view my work.
I saved it in Deviantart, because, I expect good criticism there. It's DA for Christ's sake, they have a good reputation of "retard-proofing" their website.
